Describe your person

 03/05/21 

WALT: Describe your person 

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Capital letter full stops and commas (groups of 3) 

Juicy sentences 

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My Aunty is cute as a kitten and has soft, gingerish, sparkly black hair.  

A sparkly, squishy white face that is as shiny as a new pin.  I make my Aunty smile when I give her lots of hugs.  She gives me a smile of joy, happiness, love and no fear.  My Aunty is sometimes angry with her normal look but her Eyebrows go upside down like a triangle and her happy face starts to drip into 

an angry face as hard as a nail and my Aunty and Uncle fought like cats and dogs. One of my memories that I had with my Aunty is when we pay tag we laugh and laugh so much that we can’t stop laughing. It is special because I will never forget. We have so much fun outdoors.  One day I hope we can build a hut or a treehouse at her house. I love my Aunty.