ARTE Narrative

Monday 27 September 2021

WALT: Add descriptive features to my Narrative

Once upon a time a Cheetah named Fawawa and a Kitten named Milan, were in their bed.  Fawawa is 19 and he is a cheetah with a scar on his face and white and yellow pher on his body.  Milan is 19 years old and he is a gingerish kitten.  On the last day of the weekend They wanted to have more fun on the weekend cause Milan and Fawawa hate going to school but no one knows why at school the next day Milan said “I wish school wasn’t invented because it’s boring !”  I'm with you. 

Fawawa said all exhausted and tired. The first class was history, then the next class was science. After a break at break time they had 10 mins. There was one thing they liked about school was break time so they could play.  After it was science, Fawawa and Milan were in a group with 2 Boys named Simon and Calvin that were hoping to graduate high school. They were focused but Fawawa and Milan weren't.  Their teacher Mr. Frogs were explained when school didn’t exist in 

the late 1800s and was built in the early 1900s.  Then Fawawa said “I wish we could time travel In the late 1800s And swim in the lake or the beach.”  Then it hit them when they were going to make a time travel machine to send to us in the garage but they had one problem: they didn’t know how to build it so they searched it on google and then they found a pic with the parts to build it. They followed the steppes one by one until they finished after two days.  It looked 

like a portal but it was built like a square  with a handle and they was a computer with buttons to tack they to the late 1800 or all the way to year 2060 they started the machine and saddle it did not work then Fawawa and Milan was stacked and they were in late 1800 they were so happy but they realised that there was no time travel machine they thought they were stranded there forever they tried to remember how to build it so they found the parts but they don’t no how to build it but Milan knows how to build it off by heart so they built it and now they back home to the old days they still go to school but they promised to 

never use the time travel machine forever and they all lived happily ever after.

The end.

Self Assessment

I improved my writing by:

• Corrected my spelling errors

• Used my speech marks correctly

•  Checked my writing for capital letters and full stops

To improve my, I need to:

• Stay on task with my writing.  

• Make sure I prove read my writing.

• Make sure I have a juicy sentence starter.  

   

ARTE Haka

Back in the day Te Rauparaha was a leader and a protector of his tribe and he had many enemies that wanted to kill him.  He was too weak to take on his enemies so he went on a journey to find some fighters to help him battle his 

enemies.  He whispered to himself  “Go to lake Rotoaira Te Wharerangi village will protect you.” When he arrived the Chief of the village told Te Rauparaha “ If your enemies are coming and they want to kill you.” Te Wharerangi told Te Rauparaha to hide in their potato pit because his enemies would never think of looking there.  A lady named (wahine) Te Rangi Koria was blocking the entrance so his enemies won't look there.  In the potato pit it was dark.  He put his ear on 

the wall.  He can hear dark footsteps and voices then he whispers “Will I die Will I die Will I live Will I live onward the sun is shining.”

  

ARTE spelling

 

Spelling Groups, Week 10, Term 3, 2021
List 3	List 4	List 5	List 9	List 10	Extension 1
	Zion Larell Jamie		Mihi Nico Edmon Skyla Samson Jacob Atama		Lucy Grace Kaydee Chase Hemi Koda Zana Millan Alani

List 3	List 4	List 5	List 9	List 10	Extension 1
	puncture  disappear  defeat  guard  scissors	wrestle  wrist  written  gentleman  produce  promote  progress  entire  chimney  costume	minute  luckily  having  lightning holidays  language  hopped  language  hospital  instead	alphabet  cultivate  geography  manage  representative  Antarctic decided government  material  Tokyo	observe  campaign  circular extraordinary  descend  introduction navigate  intelligent  photograph  automatic

Monday - Spelling list words and alphabetical order

Tuesday - Alphabetical order list words and Syllables

Wednesday - Alphabetical list words, then Guidewords from the Dictionary

Thursday - Juicy sentences (underline the word from your spelling list in your sentence)

Friday - Spelling test 

Spelling, Week 10, Term 3, 2021
Monday	Monday	Tuesday	Tuesday	Wednesday	Wednesday
Spelling List words	Alphabetical order	Alphabetical order list words	Syllables	Alphabetical order	Guide words
minute  luckily  having  lightning holidays  language  hopped  language  hospital  instead	Breakfast Having Holiday Hopped  Hospital  Instead Luckily Lighting language Minute	Breakfast Having Holiday Hopped  Hospital  Instead Luckily Lighting language Minute	Break-fast Hav-ing Hol-i-day Hop-ped Hos-pi-tal In-stead Lu-cki-ly Light-ing lan-gu-age min-ute	Breakfast Having Holiday Hopped  Hospital  Instead Luckily Lighting language Minute	Brethren hateful holeful hopefully hopeless Inside loyal Like Landlady missing

Thursday - Alphabetical  Spelling List Juicy Sentences - Underline the spelling list word that is in you sentence

For Breakfast I had hot garlic chips and a donut on the weekend.

At the pools I was having a blast at the pools.

On the holidays we went to the world's biggest water slide ever.

On the last day of school I hopped out of my bed and ran with excitement. I had a bad virus so mum rushed me to an amazing hospital in the USA where they cure the virus.

We were supposed to go to Rainbow's End but instead we went to grandma's house for Christmas.

I was born in China and I learnt how to speak their amazing language.

At home I was 2 minutes late and my mum told me to go to tidy my room..

At night time there was a big lighting hit the roof and cut the WiFi out, and the lights.

It was a hot summer day and everyone was hot but luckily there was a pool by my house.

Level 2 - Back to School

 09/09/21

WALT: Describe how I’m feeling

Level 2 - Back to School

This morning I sprinted with excitement and exhaustment. Like a bear but I was mostly excited. At breakfast I had 15 minutes to get dropped off and I felt like it had been 4 minutes. I was in a rush to get ready.

When I was dropped off from the bus I heard basketball bouncing and students laughing. I felt butterflies in my stomach and in my neck. I whispered to myself “I'm nervous, but you can do this!” After that I was rushing to class. I was happy to see the class. I knew that it was going to be a great day at school because it was gonna be some new work and different stuff. After I did everything myself, Nico, Hemi, Millan,

Edmon, Samson were playing Borderland Two and Three. I love playing with my friends and having morning tea and spending lunchtime with them too.

After the bell rang we were doing karakia and mihi. The students doing the karakia were Nico and Mihi Turner was doing the mihi. Then Sir was speaking through the intercom. He was talking about what the value was going to be. It was Rereketanga and Sir was saying who were the mathletics winners today. Sir was also talking about what was going to happen around the school. 

After that it was pit stop time then we played some Golden Child. I scored some goals and missed some goals but I did not care about winning.  I had a fantastic day because everyone was happy and so was I.  

ARTE Narrative writing

14 September 2021

WALT:  Follow the sequence of Narrative writing

Introducion

On a hot and blazing day in town at 12:30 PM three people named Vivo, Lebron James and Bugs Bunny were looking for Instruments to play at the beach.  Vivo wanted a drum set to play but it was too extravagant.  So 

                                                               Problem 1

Vivo asked Bugs Bunny if he had some money.  Vivo was Curious that Bugs Bunny had some money but he said “NO cause I'm saving up to buy some new shores.”  Vivo was sad that he couldn’t buy the drum set to play at the beach.  Vivo was starting to give up and Vivo was getting tired by then like a sleeping koala hanging on a tree. He was struggling to buy the Drum set to play.  They were there for 2 hrs 59 mins and 10 sec.

                                                               Problem 2  

Then Vivo asked Lebron James and he said yes but he couldn't find his wallet with his money.  He thought he left it at home so they spread it to his house before  the store closed. They were looking around but they 

couldn't find it. So they went to the shop and retraced their steps to find the wallet. After a long time of  retracing their steps they found it.  

                                                              Solution 1

After they found the wallet. Vivo used 5000 dollar bills to buy it. After he buyed it he seated it up and played the drums and they all live happily ever after. 

ARTE T3 Asttle Writing

 22 September 2021

WALT:  Express myself in Narrative Writing

Once upon a time an old angry bus driver named Jeff and his friend Jack went camping in the jungle by themselves because they were ready to learn how to camp in the outdoors.  They got their stuff to go camping in the wonderland like how they dreamed when they were kids at the same age 7 years old.  They are now 22 and a half years old.  Jack was asking “when are we going to get there? I am so bored?”  and so hungry.

Body the Jungle

They were walking for 2 hrs and 10 mins and Jack was grumpy like a dog that he didn't have anything to eat and then they arrived at the lake and then they set up their tents and started to fish on a boat by the tents.  Jeff was counting how many fish they cached and how many bait they had so they could continue fishing cause it was fantastic and amazing to fish outdoors cause they fish with their dad on a summer day by the lake at 1:30 or 12:50. It was getting close to dinner time so they were getting the stuff out and for their dinner after there  dessert was going the be smores then bed time.    

Conclusion Problem

After that it was bedtime Jeff answered “We have to get up at 4:30 so we can get home at 6:00 for breakfast.  The next day they lost track of time and they woke up at 5:00 o'clock then they started to walk but then they were lost in the jungle but they found their way out and they got there in time for breakfast.

Empowerment

Today Whaea Donna taught me and the class how to get rid of mean comments on are blogs that we Publish,  this is my slide that Whaea Donna gave us, we insert a photo of us then we write three trusted adults in the three boxes.  I love learning new things.